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Re: Soundless noise
"Giving a peaceful melody That brings forth serenity" - Peaceful melody? I can hear the melody, so soundless kinda defeated the poem. But your word choices are good. I can ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Revolt
This is amazing work. . seriously. Your word choices are good too. I can feel everything your talking about. "Unheard are the shrieks of my soul to the holiest" -Shrieks ...
Nov 25, 2013