Brian

Copy that! Troy yelled over the comm system in response to his wingman. The captain interrupted. Okay Gamma group, prepare for some alien butt! The four ships in Gamma were ...

Oh gray threads, Will you envelop me Into a heart-warming embrace Of Brotherly love? To cover, to share the warmth That only you can provide? Oh, as I don you ...

After you ve grown up, it s hard to remember what it was like on that last day of school. Nobody paid any attention to the teacher and you always ...

I m falling he finally realized. He was not really falling, but he was not really rising or even just staying still either. He kind of just was Alone. Totally ...

I like the way you opened it up; it definitely grabbed my attention and made want to read more. You ...

No extra words, no extra lines. Excellent descriptions, excellent prose.

As the title implies, I wrote this to be very specifically like the Hitchhikers Guide. Of course, the plot is different, but I'm shooting for the same general style. The ...

I see this poem in two ways. One, it's about someone who was contemplating suicide, but then started thinking about all the things he has to live for. Or two, ...