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Re: The Tears of Battle
I find this story very interesting. I like the use of bright language, you really painted a picture with your words. But you repeated the word "sword" too much, you ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Books you loved more than the movie...
This has happened to me plenty of times. Books: Hoot Inkheart Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief Harry Potter Narnia Great books make great movies.(but the books are better though ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Break
This is a good story with a good plot, but i see a few problems. 1) The story is good but you need to be more specific. you jumped right ...
Jan 5, 2011