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BreezySprout

  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 2- The Date

    Wonderful, I%u2019m so glad you enjoyed this! I tried to fix a lot of the mistakes pointed out from people from the last chapter, I%u2019m glad it was noticeable! It ...

    Jan 5
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Anxiety

    That%u2019s fair. Thank you!

    Jan 5
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Anxiety

    Thank you for your review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it. :3

    Jan 5
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Anxiety

    Oh for sure! But what I mean was, I don%u2019t want it to be too short and boring to someone, you know? And no worries!!

    Jan 4
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Anxiety

    Can you all let me know whether you feel this is too short or not? I have more that are this length and I’m wondering about posting them 2 at ...

    Jan 4
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 2- The Date

    ARGH I have no idea how that happened. I probably typed too fast and didn%u2019t catch it in my re-read. I can fix that, lol. I get that for sure, ...

    Jan 4
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 2- The Date

    Thank you for your review!

    Jan 4
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 2- The Date

    The errors in Karley’s texts after Abigail leaves are intentional! If you notice any other grammar or spelling mistakes feel free to point them out though. Happy reading! 💕 Also, ...

    Jan 3
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 1- The Meeting

    Okay guys, I made some edits to this one (mostly punctuation errors and spelling errors) so hopefully it’s better for future readers/reviewers! :3

    Jan 3
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 1- The Meeting

    Bruh why the heck does it do that with apostrophes ;-;

    Dec 28, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 1- The Meeting

    ARGH very frustrated because I don%u2019t think my reply to you posted ;-; Do you see it on your end? If not I will retype it begrudgingly lol

    Dec 28, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 1- The Meeting

    Thank you so much for such a lengthy review!! I really appreciate it. As of right now, I%u2019m not *too* worried about grammatical errors I make but I do appreciate ...

    Dec 28, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 1- The Meeting

    Thank you for your review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed reading this first part. :3

    Dec 28, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: And now there are five more Richardson short stories!

    This was a wonderful read! I’m sure this is because there are other parts I haven’t read, but parts of this is confusing to me. In the first section, it ...

    Dec 27, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: I’m Glad You Called

    Thank you so much, that%u2019s super helpful critiques! Yeah, I definitely struggle with sentence structure ;-; I tried to italicize when Alex was speaking to help with clarifying who was ...

    Dec 27, 2025


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