Breezy

There are several reasons I like this poem. One is that the title doesn't seem like an afterthought. It adds to the experience of reading the poem. Just the title ...

A splintered fence— pin-strung and puckered mouths, plucked, the roses are dying. Messiah strokes their ranks, steps between the feather-lipped heads to inquire, What mortal needle sows stem to soul

Oh man, this made me think of Jeff Buckley and made me sad inside. ): I'm going to be blunt. I wasn't a huge fan of this piece. Now, hear ...

Whoo - hoo! *sharpens her claws* Let's rip this apart! In a good way, I mean. I'll go line by line/paragraph by paragraph. The Inch Chapter 1 - Meeting I ...

I first read this and saw words like "confusion" and "ardor" and was thinking, wow, this must be depressing. It sounds really heavy. But in the end I interpret it ...

Love the concept! I just think that you've got some work to do on making it flow better. "Inside a plastic girl, within a plastic shell, Lives a lonely soul ...

I liked the length. I think that when you write something short, it makes every single letter, every word, that much more important. "What I thought went up were the ...

Atlas Shrugged by Ayn Rand. Okay, I'd take ANY excuse to reccomend this book, but the characters truly follow the American spirit - They're hard working, independent, really strong larger-than-life ...