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Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 3
Thank you so much!
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: 'Falling For You' - Prologue
Thank you! I like your input about integrating more subtle description into the story, but the "flames rising from the clouds, disintegrating their wings etc." part that you suggested wouldn't ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: Dresses and Politics Part 1: Chapter 2
Oh, that's cool!
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 2
I will!
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 2
It transported these chapters from Wattpad, where I had a cast picked out for the characters. I'll add some descriptions of her and also add a picture of the actress ...
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 2
Thank you! I was typing pretty fast, so I must have missed the typos I made XD
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 2
Thank you. I've been writing for as long as I can remember, from the times when we had to write those cheesy stories in kindergarten, all the way until now, ...
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 1
Thank you; I'm glad you liked it!
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 1
Both of the things you described have been looked over and revised; you can check it out if you want.
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 1
Thank you, and I'll check those things you mentioned!
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: Chapter One: The Boy Who Saved Me
Sorry about the multiple comments I made! I'm new to this site and my computer seemingly glitched out.
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: Chapter One: The Boy Who Saved Me
Heyo! so, overall I feel like this was really very well written; it had great descriptions, great vocabulary, and a great character-to-character introduction between Cain and Jared. The way you ...
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: 'When I Think Of You' - Chapter 1
I have the second chapter written already, as I have already been writing this story on Wattpad. I will PM you once I have it up!
Jul 13, 2016