BookWorm97

I can see where you are coming from and will try and improve on that point about the description. About the punctuation marks at the end of speech, I actually ...

Thank you so much! Im glad you like it!

Thank you so much your kinds words. You see this piece of writing was done for school and had to be around 130 words no more or no less. So ...

Thank you for you kind words and suggestions. It means a lot!

I understand what you're saying. I, myself, was rather unsure about this particular piece of writing and wanted others opinion on it. Thank you for taking the time to write ...

No problem

I completely agree with what your saying. I wrote this around a year ago and thought I'd give it a shot. You've definitely giving me something to think about and ...

Thank you for taking the time to read it!!

Hey there MaskedGurl Your short story was very short indeed! It was very descriptive and lively! You should really consider putting some fullstops in there. I really liked it! I ...