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Re: The End of Forever
Ok i'm just going to say it ....... this made me cry, it made me cry before I even knew I was crying. It made me cry in a way ...
Mar 21, 2015 -
Re: My love
thank you and I felt the same way about the line "rejoice for all at once your fight is over" I just couldn't figure out how to change it. So ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: My love
Thanks for the advise I'll use your tips the next time I write a poem!
Mar 21, 2013 -
Re: Escaping Reality
this is just amazing. I really felt as if I was there, they way you describe every thing is just amazing. I really wish i could write like you, but ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Mustang
Thanks I'll take everything into account next time I'm writing.
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: The Beast
The beast is what she imagined her worst nightmare to be. It was the thing that she knew was coming that is why she was drawn to the house. She ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Imortalised
Thank you for the advise and I will take it all into account!
Nov 27, 2012 -
Re: Imortalised
thank you I hope to keep writing for as long as I can!!
Nov 27, 2012 -
Re: understand me when I open myself to you
I don't know why but this poem touches me in a way i cannot describe. It is as if someone were speaking this to me and I was not reading ...
Nov 7, 2012
