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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Stray part 1 / A fictional tale from the perspective of a street dog

    I will read it

    Sep 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 2 - Of Dark Lords and Mystics

    I am sorry that you felt I was being mean about this. In all honesty I love this.

    Sep 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Stray part 1 / A fictional tale from the perspective of a street dog

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    Okay I really like this. Everything can be pictured so vividly. and this reminds me of Disney. I also love how you have the dogs act mentally like humans. This ...

    Sep 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: the child of the sun god.

    Feel free to ask for a sequel....or not.....And for all one of you wondering this is based on giant monsters which I love

    Sep 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Iceling

    I feel glad that you are interested in the story and don't want it to fail. I will try to edit this as best I can

    Sep 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Trials of a Master Thief: Chapter 1

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    Pros: I for one love the characters. I like how you can perfectly envision where the characters are. I adore the way you describe everything. I have to say this ...

    Sep 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Magic, Bread, and Blood ~ 1

    Technically speaking you can feel like that since you never truly close your eyes since if you were to close your eyes and open your eyes near a light. You ...

    Sep 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 2 - Of Dark Lords and Mystics

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    I wonder how you will be able to make our protagonist be really important. After all if your character has magic. What's the point of everyone else having magic. Unless ...

    Sep 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: There's a Fine Line Prologue (GORE WARNING)

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    First off, oh god the grammar problems. Second I have never heard of the original story you are basing this off of but the art style looks good. What are ...

    Sep 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Light Maiden's Mark, Chapter 1 - Longing for the Dreamer

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    Am I the only one who finds it weird that this seems more like a fantasy genre with a character going to a whole new world. If you want to ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Addicted to a Shadow - Chapter One

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    I truly love this idea. In all honesty I legit thought this was going to be a romance story. Luckily it wasn't. I really love the protagonist and how she ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Iceling

    I agreed with you 99 percent of the read. However one thing that seemed odd to me was the fact you said that the action was really fast. To me ...

    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Iceling

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    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Iceling

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    Sep 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Iceling

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    Sep 18, 2017


Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
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