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No worries, happy to help! Aaaah that makes way more sense :P I actually read the other reviews after I was done and realised I'd seen it completely differently to ...

OKAY I didn't realise this was from February -- I saw it in the Writer's Corner and I liked the blurb so I assumed it was recent. I hope you ...

Glad to hear! :D Ohh okay. Yeah, I realised after you explained the bands thing - but I'd explain it more about her being cold-blooded if you could, then! I ...

Cheers beg. That was super helpful - I totally agree with everything now that you've pointed them out. I'm finding slowing down quite hard to do but we'll get there, ...

Thanks Pey

The fact that you are so many miles away from home and have absolutely no clue that this is on the front page makes me laugh even harder. This. Is. ...

Indeed.

I forgot I hadn't replied to this xD But yeah, thank you for this

Thanks for your review, Pres! Haki is around 17-19ish xD But yeah, I understand what you mean by him sounding too young; I want to keep that sense of boyishness ...

*said about the vagueness, I mean xD I'm curious about the connection you mentioned here. What created/left a lack of connection with Haki? A lack of thought process or? :3

Thanks for your review, Sarah! It's actually set in some kind of dystopian society, although I tried to make it less "what if ____ was illegal" and more focusing on ...

Boo Michael Gove! That is all.

Thanks for your review, Crystal! :D (and yes it was of a lot help :3)

Thank you for the review, WW! :D

Thanks for your review, Comical! :D Yes, those were personal memories xD I'll be sure to take your advice on.