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Hi hello sorry for taking ages let's go! First read-through It looked just like New York back home, but emptier., Stray comma you've probably been warned of already :P I ...

hello hello let's get going First read-through He'd been lying awake for the previous twenty minutes, but that didn't mean he had any desire to start this day. BIG BIG ...

200th review! This is my LMS novel OKAY PHEW I was worried I'd just reviewed something too old! anyway let's get going I'm very excited to read First read-through Once ...

Hey! I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours and I'm fairly rusty anyway, so this will be interesting. I've deliberately not read any previous reviews so there may ...

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Hello! She stared up at Patrick. "Can she, you know... play Mario Kart?" HAHAHA. Not that I didn't enjoy the last chapter, but I enjoyed this one a lot more! ...

Biscuits! Bit rusty, but hopefully this will be helpful nonetheless! The giraffes played catch, the lion told your future [...] the crocodiles did blind taste testing So admittedly I don't ...

yooooooooooooooo what’s up I haven’t written a review in ages - why do I start all my reviews like this? - but let’s do this anyway. Nice start. You repeat ...

*Stretches review muscles* Gooooood morning. Here to review! "Because if I do, I'll lose you!" The women's lips crashed togeth-" I’d remove the speech mark after “togeth–” – I thought ...

Iiiiiit's time for another review! Well hello there, Daniel. And I'm liking this more and more. Daniel and Lydia should totally get together. coughcoughishipthemcough I love how it ties into ...

Yo, Flite. Bluesy here for a review. I really really liked this. I thought it was really interesting and I loved how everything didn't seem quite clear, as if we ...

*rolls in for another review* Gooood morning. It's that time! This is getting more and more interesting. I like it a lot! I really like the characterisation and the fact ...

Hey Lefty! Bluesy here. I'll admit, I liked this chapter a lot xD The story feels much less Hunger Gamesish (but I guess it was unavoidable in the last chapter) ...

Hey, Lefty! Blues here, ready to review. Sorry for the late review - but I'm going to hopefully get as much done of what you've posted so far as soon ...

Hey Peyton! Time for a review >D I hope you don't mind being a guinea pig because I haven't reviewed for almost 11 months so forgive me if this review ...