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Re: Short cryptid stories; The Wendigos
Hailo, Spartan118! This was an interesting short. I heard about Wendigos, but I haven't gone in depth with them and didn't realize they possessed cannibalistic people. Revision: There are very ...
May 8, 2018 -
Re: Six Month Journey [Chapter One]
Hailo, Kanome! Being new, I haven't seen your previous chapter. However, I can tell you now that this revised one has a lot of potential! You set the exposition in ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Stand
Hailo, TheSingingWonder! For right now, I can see that this is supposed to be a chapter of a book. It's a good start, though there are a few kinks you ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Closed.
Hailo, eccedentesiast! I just wanted to start off sayin that this short story was awesome. The things I like about it is how you incorporated one of the scariest things ...
May 2, 2018