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BlueDoorway

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dionysus pours a drink

    Your poem was fun! I liked the way you used alliteration and good word choice, like with "Bitter burning behind bruised lips" You build up your plot and the pace ...

    Feb 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Encounter With a Memory

    This was such a sweet, engaging piece! I love how you characterize the main character throughout the whole story as being apart from the rest, and how that contrasts with ...

    Dec 27, 2022


This planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much all of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movement of small green pieces of paper, which was odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy