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grammar is not my strong suit, in fact i suck at it so instead i will say my likes and dislikes and over all comment. Likes- it has a thrill ...

well, i am not very good with grammar so no helping you there for me, and the few i caught rosey stated already. So i will just say my likes ...

well as always the others beat me to the grammar so i will say my likes and dislikes. Likes- very descriptive it was intriguing and mysterious kept me into it ...

Well everyone else took grammar away so i will say my likes and dislikes for me. likes: An interesting beginning I liked how you gave nothing away but gave a ...

Well everyone else took what i found already so i will say what liked and did not like on it in general. Like: it was an interesting plot A good ...