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Re: the first chap. of my novel
Not badly written, but extremely short. This isn't a chapter, it's a paragraph. Write more before you post. You make us wonder about the bungalow but you stop there. Why?! ...
Aug 13, 2007 -
Re: Woe
Snoink speaks the truth! Too many adjectives. But as she also says, cut 'em out and you've got a pretty bare lookin poem. You have a quandary. This poem is ...
Aug 13, 2007