Blink

I'd advice against the 'everyone does it' stance. Why? Because it's like an inventor saying everything's been invented. You think it's right to steal other people's ideas, then get famous/infamous ...

Haha! How did I miss this ? You know, before I knew anything about writing, I would read it aloud and use some pathetic voice to make it sound good. ...

I loved it. The ending was very sad, but I still feel like reading it again. :)

Thanks for the thoughts :)

Thanks everyone for the reviews! Sadie--as with prose, you only capitalise the first letter of each sentence, and of a proper noun, but thanks :)

makes you think... WHY do authors get published and yet better ones get passed over? Paolini got his self-published. His parents, in actual fact. A publisher then took him after ...

Thanks, I'm writing up the battle scene (was going in anyway) and hopefully the edited version should be up soon :)

You are both completely right. Kylan - I've been thinking about those irritating metaphors for a while. I feel like chopping them off and finally, I shall :) It shall ...

Ye I agree, the plot is easy to do, but the fact that he denies any form of relation to other stories just annoys me :)

Thanks for the review! I agree, but right now I think if I rewrite it I will just be back where I was before, draft after draft... :)

Thanks both of you, I suddenly enjoy writing poetry :)

Oh right, no problem them :)

The Book Thief! Lord of the Ringa goes without saying. Oh, and anything by George Orwell, or Ian McEwan.

*grins* Well, only immature writers take ideas from other people, claim it as their own and think they are some wonderful novelist :D

How about... Arya kissed Eragon and they made a baby. See, he's so immature he's probably never had sex ed... 8)