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Re: I live with V.A.mpires
WOW! this story was great except for th grammatical errors, but anyway the story is good. Is it gonna be continued. By the way, this piece has inspired me to ...
May 27, 2010 -
Re: Goosebumps fan-fiction: Night at Murder Mansion, part 1
I noticed sometimes in the middle of a sentence, you spelt "Mum" wrong. It should always have a capital letter. Cavemans are stereotypically short: and I tower over her. It ...
May 20, 2010 -
Re: Under your Spell
SORRY I DIDN'T KNOW where to post it cos i only joined yws last year. :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Freestyle. Origional. Mine Only.
OOmg, I can't believe you still go on this website, I thought you would have found it boring. Anyway in the poem i did fine a spelling mistake on Abis ...
Jun 30, 2009 -
Re: Tarantula
Haha I swear I corrected those spelling mistakes
May 18, 2009 -
Re: _
Hi i'm new here. This story is too short, and too rude. There are a lot of grammatic mistakes which show me that you haven't been concentrating.
May 3, 2009