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You have a gorgeous way of describing and illustrating ideas on the page. You're poem says otherwise. It is wrong. I especially like this line, 'You wanted me to learn ...

I think the point of the sweatshirt was just to relate it to something else physical that is attached to him. The tree is basically a layer of clothing that ...

I hate to reiterate the same point but the first two stanza's are gold. While the second two lack the same potency as the others their meanings complete the poem, ...

The old man of a train huffed and puffed his way into Holly’s Brooke station (does this mean that the train was old? I would rework the sentence a little ...

“Damn right, you do.” Colin grinned sinisterly. (reword. Maybe Colin sneered? This sounds strange) The hand from his shirt snaked around Micah’s throat, coiling round him like a Boa Constrictor,

Right on, man. I want to know know what the heck happened! If you continue to post this I'll continue reading it. I only have a few suggestions that you ...