Bladesmith

Thanks, that was what i was aiming for. Yep that was a mistake the last stanza is essentially about temptation of the valley of the shadow (from the biblical valley ...

Thank you so much everyone! (yeah the tab button doesnt work on this website for me :/ ). i apologize for not posting more yet. just started a new semester ...

ha ha okay, just throwing it out there.

You mention that the mansion is made from black marble. I hope you dont mean actually built from the marble. marble is a relatively week metamorphic rock. it is better ...

Thanks spitfire! ^_^ nit picking is more than welcomed (for the life of me i cannot edit my own stuff. I always end up reading through it and skipping over ...

I suppose i should clarify. There should be more description, but some of the stuff you have should have less description. The following article may help you. If the reader ...

Alright, sounds good to me. the only other thing i can think of that kind of has me confused is the nature of damions character. he was the one you ...

I'm not a big poetry person, but i really like this. It strikes a chord with those who have been through something like that. I dont know if this is ...

Absolutely awesome! Hilarious in a morbid and sickening way, which is strange but pleasing. Maybe i missed it, but why were they heading through the garden in the first place?

Yep ^_^ I started teaching myself about two years ago. most people take classes with a master bladesmith or some sort of lessons, but ive taught myself using only the ...