Blackwood

Sorry, but the tense was done on purpose. It differentiates between the double past and the present. I know perfectly well how to use tense and it changes throughout the ...

I think so? But the basement thing wasn't supposed to be a hunch. Nathaniel obviously knew there was a trapdoor there and the others simply thought he was making up ...

Thank you for your review. Once again exceptional and actually helpful for once. I did notice the wig sign thing mistake I did, though when you went on a tangent ...

I wouldn't call this a review at all. xD

Ohhhhhhh I didn't notice I contradicted myself there. I should have someone else notice it's a wig salon, not Nazza.

The first one I sort of agree with you, and there is a way to improve the wording, but since it's dialogue I felt like it could be preserved. The ...

First and third one.

Well if you want to specialize in that, you need to make sure that you are right for all of them then.

The reason is grammar nit picks aren't really helpful and talking about the story is. Especially considering all of those you mentioned above were either typos (which I have now ...

So it was you Laure? Haha.

One of you marked yours as a review but it is clearly not a review. It should be fixed.

One of you marked yours as a review but it is clearly not a review. It should be fixed.

mmm I'd have to finish it and redo it. And sometimes writing it strains my head. It's like a puzzle. If reading it is hard, writing is trying to fit ...

Thanks Hannah. I remember I was planning something for the third part of this but I seem to have forgotten about it. It is extremely difficult to write these.

The Main Character is counted as one of the 6.