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Re: Second Always Comes Last: Hospital
I'll have you know that if you read any of the other chapters of this you would find that it's about a teenage boy who has gruesomely murdered multiple people ...
Feb 26, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Hospital
What???????
Feb 26, 2015 - Re: Second Always Comes Last: Dear Police Feb 26, 2015
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Re: Second Always Comes Last: Handshake
*incorrect
Feb 24, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Handshake
Thanks for your review. You picked up some good typos and mismarks ect. A few things you were icorrect about however, so be careful when correcting. You can't say "More ...
Feb 24, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Handshake
Wait what... past tense. When I did that it came up with present tense so I was trying to correct everything to present tense. I FORGOT WHICH TENSE I used. ...
Feb 23, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Handshake
I know I keep changes tenses by mistake. I had to go through the last chapter manually and keep changing it and I thought I did it with this chapter ...
Feb 23, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Second Leader
Excuse me? That's it. Cutting ot Beau feature from the new chapter.
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Second Leader
Like I replied to blue below, thanks. I love hearing what you think of the chapters. You and Blue seem to be battling this Beau vs Anti-Beau, we'll have to ...
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Second Leader
Thanks for that. I agree with Nazza being way too sudden at that point. I was i the middle of writing and then suddenly though "Wah- Nazza is being too ...
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Edward Cullen is UGLY!
Ommmggg you are so right, you tell her baby, man I will NEVER forgive the writer of this story either!!!I got so mad. Edvard is way hot. He's like an ...
Feb 20, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Family Matters
Thanks for the review XD. To be honest I have no idea what is going on in this chapter because I wrote the first half of it a really long ...
Jan 31, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Juliet
I'm bad at tense change. I swear this novel started in present tense and at some point I lost it. I agree with the nazza and respecting/liking him. That's something ...
Jan 17, 2015 -
Re: AdIóS AmigO: A DorA ThE ExploReR FanFictioN.
I did not know that.thank you for enlighting me
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Symbols
Dare ye challenge true English and tell me to spell honour incorrectly! Do you have no honour?
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