BlackXcat

Readers please keep in mind that this piece of work is constantly changing and being rewritten. Review it, or just read it, do whatever you like. Just try not to ...

I posted this purely because I could. I wanted to give an opportunity to let people in on my writing process. The hook IS the first paragraph. You get one ...

The first paragraph is disjointed from the rest of the story. That was the purpose. They are two completely different scenes. Also, you might be confused purely because of some ...

Thanks for your review. Firstly, the line is "leaving white trails through the dirt on her skin". So that is how tears can leave white trails. hahaha Secondly, I have ...

Im hoping these first few pages can set an example for the ones that follow. I think once I get it get it to sound as good as possible I ...

thanks man. I did notice the pacing is a bit too fast. Part of the editing is to try and add more to each scene and maybe tell a little ...

FYI to reviewers and readers... I am currently editing this, so feel free to leave your comments but keep in mind that it is still in the works.