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Re: I Had Survived The Fog
Wow! Great writing! Your personification of the fog really sparked my interest within the first few lines. For some reason, I REALLY liked the part with the stop signs. I ...
Dec 11, 2014 -
Re: The End
Hello! Wonderful writing! To begin with, based off of this piece you seem to be a strong descriptive writer. The first paragraph does a nice job of painting the scene ...
Dec 11, 2014