BigBadBear

Please don't tell me that's the end. Don't worry it's not. This can't be the end. Have I ever been known to have my stories end happily? Believe me. This ...

Hey, Adam, Mark, thanks! This is fantasy. It may not seem like it right now, but it is. Thanks though! BBB

Well, I didn't expect this to get this many reviews. I mean, 2 pages of reviews for only 2 pages of typing. Well done! Lol Well, I just wrote chapter ...

Thanks Vernon. He and I are having a nice long chat, and I've come to agree that I will be locking this down and posting the chapters individually. So, I'll ...

Sorry it's taken me so long. I've been in a constant writer's block that I haven't been able to rid of until today. I hope you like this next (and ...

Yeah, I think that I am going to do what Snoink said. I've tried writing about a drunk father (Beautifully Evil) and I just can't do it right. So I'll ...

Hey, thanks guys. A million. It's really helped me when you guys have critted this, so I hope that this next part will spark your interest if you are losing ...

Everything is now edited, according to all of the mistakes that you guys found. So, now I'll go back and answer some questions: GryphonFledging & cat4prowl: One question, what is ...

Thanks for all of the crits and stuff. Jabber, you have truely saved this story. thanks you a bazillion for finding that there were Prime Ministers in the 1800s. You ...

(Why did you post this in fantasy? This is a poem...)

Hey! Thanks for all of your comments. Jabber, I edited all of those mistakes that you found. So thanks. I am having a little bit of a breakdown though. This ...

XD Wow. Uh, wow. I really don't know what to say. I was going to make a big long crit, full of grammar errors but (surprise!) I didn't see any. ...

Are you serious? You're amazing. No, dying is when you aren't living anymore AND when you dye something another color. Oh, yeah, and before I forget: this story isn't rated ...

Thanks guys. Kazdrea - I understand what you are talking about. I researched the Great Depression and found out that it sort of got worse in the 30s. So, do ...

Thanks Kylan. Anyway, here is Chapter Two: Chapter Two Arnold awoke to Papa’s slamming of the door. His eyes jerked open and his heart started to race. He gripped his ...