BigBadBear

Kylan-- Holy cow! I haven't critiqued this yet?! Sheesh. I suck. Just publish it all so I can go buy the book. It'd be a lot easier. Well said. Well, ...

Teague -- I love this. I was laughing from the line that said we should all fake a disability and join Special Ed. That was very funny; you've done something ...

Connie-- I have good news and bad news. The Good, the Bad and the Ugly. I'll give you the good news first. You've done a great job with this story ...

Hey, Kylan. Annie shrugs. Her little flowerprint dress is sucked up against the skin with all her sweat, and you can see her bony, hipless shape. Her tongue slithering out ...

Connie-- I hate it when great writers don't get many reviews. It's sad to see such work go unnoticed! That's why I'm here! Hopefully I'll be able to give you ...

Hey, Kylan. I've always found your poems incredibly hard to critique, because I always thought that they were perfect because they were written so brilliantly. So, can I say that ...

Hey! Sorry. I didn't forget about this, it's just I had other stuff to do. But now I'm here! ^_^ like dust blown off of old things. I do this ...

Hey, Kylan! You're right. I love horror stories! Buddy wakes up slowly. There is a musty taste in his mouth, and his jaw cracks open like the spine of a ...

Hi there! I'm Jared, and I'll be giving you a quick review. Sometimes the emptiness of it hurt my eyes. Not all the time. I love your opening sentence. It ...

Hi there! I'm Jared, and I'll be giving you a short critique for this story prologue. I have to say that this plot has been done a million times? But... ...

Hey, Cat! I don't think I've read anything of yours. >.< I'm a failure of a friend. “Sissy?” Ella asked. Ella was my younger sister of eight years with golden ...

Hi! My name's Jared, and I'm here to give you a quick little review of this piece. When young writers start out, they usually produce writing similar to this. Which ...

... talk about ironic. I didn't like this as much as I thought I would. In the beginning, I was so confused, but... for some reason, I think I liked ...

Kylan, Running as fast a she can, branches scratching at her naked arms and raw pink cheeks. 'as', not 'a'. I read this sentence out loud and it's a little ...

Hey, Sumi! A little boy nobody bothered to introduce to the class, he hung around during recess and watched me for a week or so. This sentence makes perfect sense, ...