BigBadBear

Oh my gosh. That was the coolest thing I have read all day. Besides the two things that I found, there was nothing wrong with it 1. I nodded, the ...

Wow! Freaky, and scary! Very cool! There are a couple things I wanted to point out: 1. Today only 5 years later, Tara was still wishing Billy would come back ...

Hey! Good job. There was a few grammeratical stuff and spelling that I will point out. 1. I put my hand on my mouth to stop the bile rising in ...

Oh my gosh! That was the stranges thing I have read in years! Who ever knew that the pot could cure almost anything? Oh gosh, this was halirious! You should ...

The only thing that bothered me here was that I think you should put the letters that he recieved in italics. It will make it more noticable. And I was ...

Wow! This is a great story! I really like how you described the charactors using humor and things like that. Well, to make a long story short, I agree with ...

Ok, the only main problem I had with it was that it went by to fast, and as soon as I was done reading it, I was like, "Oh...What?" There ...

I don't think that you introduced them too much, cause who says that you can't explain them more later, after all of this affair? This story totally grabbed me from ...

Hey! Great Subject! I really liked how it caught me when you said "a corpse" Anyway, I was a little confused when I read the next part, and it went ...

Heya! I loved this little section because it totally grabbed me from the beginning. Almost like at the second or third paragraph, I had a clear picture of the setting ...

Wow! That is amazing! I really like the idea that you have, and you have creative names and things. You are really creative, and I can't wait to read the ...