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Hey, Kylan. Thanks for the review. I notice that you tend to repeat things a lot. Especially in your first paragraph. Gagging bedside flowers, turning on her, turning on her ...

Vanadis, This is pretty good. It really is. You have a really mysterious story, a couple of cool characters, and a great plot. It’s all there, but not all of ...

Conrad, I like the idea that you’ve put behind this. I looked at the painting, and I’m surprised that you came up with an original idea like this. Good job. ...

Kylan, YES. This was so incredibly beautiful and insightful and wonderful I can’t even begin. There was a certain feeling that I got—sleepiness? Drowsiness? And it wasn’t because it was ...

Galerius, I found this a terribly exciting bit of poetry here. I loved how you included mythology. I thought it was very fun to read, and the analogies you used ...

Hey, Imagination. I saw you were new to this site, so I'd like to welcome you. My name is Jared, and I've taken a look over your piece. It is ...

Hey. Just a few little things: Once, he asked her, in the strange state he was in, what death was like. How would she know what death was like? She's ...

I agree with Gahks. I wish I could critique this, but I'm a huge fan of your poetry, Kylan, and I found this beautiful. And I also found out that ...

Hey, Kamas. This was definitely interesting. I don't understand why the first and second stanza are separated, because they deal with the same subject-ish. I mean, the set up is ...

Hey DreamBeliever! My name is Jared, and I'll be your reviewer today. Just a warning: I see you're new to the site. Why don't you make a post in the ...

defendthelegend, This, in its shortness, is actually quite stirring and good. I have but a few comments on this poem: Temptation forces >> 'forces' isn't a very powerful image. I ...

Hey. Looks like you have a ton of reviews already, so sorry if I repeat anything. I don't want to read every single critique. This is an extremely well written ...

Stella, And when got to the Seven Tunnels- that was where the, the creature had come from, which one would I choose? Uh... "that was where the, the creature"? What? ...

Sapphirejay, This is a pretty good piece of poetry you have here! There are a lot of conflicts in this poem, which is a really good thing. I like a ...

Kylan, I've been meaning to critique this for a while. Well, ever since I saw that you posted it. Mainly because I'm kindaalittleokmaybealot in love with your poetry. So, yesterday, ...