BigBadBear

Hey! Welcome to YWS! This is a pretty decent poem you have here. Although... I would cut out the 'f' bomb because it doesn't add anything to the story except ...

Sam, This is beautiful. I don't know what it is about it. It's just so different and awesome and superb and *goes on and on* There was only one sentence ...

I'm glad you told me this was up! Okay, let's see how I can help you. BEAT THOSE DRUMS LIKE YOU JUST DON'T CARE! Uh, yes. This doesn't really have ...

Hey! Thanks for posting in my Free Reviews! “Cleaning time!” A young girl sang, her hands above her head as robots of many detached form the wall and hovered around ...

Suz! You didn't PM me when this came out! Well, I'm gonna be the first to critique! Tutoring continued as always, but with growing interruptions. Every time I said the ...

Wow, Jabber, this is getting morbid. Hehe. Okay, I honestly think that everything is happening too quickly. Everyone is dying too quickly! Ugh! I think it's gonna be impossible to ...

Hey, Kylan! Edits first! The bridge spanning across a constellation of dimensions like an ocean trillion marble-sized stars was just to big, too expansive. marble-sized stars WERE just TOO big, ...

At first I thought this was talking about a lightning storm, but after about the second stanza I dropped that. I really don't know what it's about... Anyway, your line ...

'Kay. I'm gonna be very truthful with you here. I didn't like this. I was expecting something else entirely. In fact... none of this made sense. I couldn't understand what ...

Holy freak! Uh! I do not wanna leave a critique right now, lol. I gotta find out what happens. But since you're such a freak-tastic writer, I gotta leave one. ...

Hey, Kylan! Well, I'm going to echo every critique when I say it was friggen awesome. Not that that's totally surprising. Has there ever been anything that hasn't exceeded my ...

Hey! Thanks for the critique on my story. I am so glad you're back! YWS is hopeless without Fangala! I could never know what I never learned; I could never ...

No. No. This... this can't end here. Suz, please, you have to post more! Once I read the first one, I didn't even bother critiqing because I needed to find ...

Razor! How goes things? This looks really cool. Well, hah. What am I saying? Everything you do is fantabulous. I feel like being harsh. :) For first sentence is an ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! I must say that before I even started reading this, your little introduction back-up story was very interesting. Really urged me to read on. ‘I am ...