BigBadBear

Haha. Cute story. I liked it. It was smooth, easy to read, and even a bit fun. There's only one place that I didn't think really fit too well, You ...

Hey! Kylan, I have to tell you something. I can't do it any longer. I'm not supposed to read this until the contest is over, but it just looks so ...

Hey there. You had critiqued something of mine, so I thought that you might want a bit of help on this. In my line-by-line attachment below, I could barely find ...

Hey, Kylan. As Audy waited for the first early morning walkers and joggers to pass by the bench on the footpath [insert comma here] leaves shuffled by him on the ...

I read Velocity. It's really good. It's about a guy that gets these papers that says, "If you report this to the police, I'll kill a school teacher. If you ...

Holy. Crap. I feel like crying right now. I don't think I've ever been touched more by something on YWS. This is... ohmigosh. So touching. So beautiful. So perfect. Okay, ...

Haroun didn’t have enough fingers for the number of laws he had broken. Lying there in smuggled Levi’s in the basement of his cousin’s house, he tried to count them--using ...

Razor, You said that you didn’t exactly like this one, and neither did I. I was very iffy from the beginning. It didn’t exactly make all that much sense to ...

Razor, Yet again, another wonderful installment. I really like this story, and I can’t wait to find out what happened. You have me hooked. I think this is going to ...

Penguin! Howdy! Of course his father would be turning in his grave. Nice pun. XD He cut them off with a wave of his hand – singed slightly, Singed? Singed ...

Hey, there! It looks like you have a lot of critiques. lol. I'll do my best to make it up to par with the rest. I am in agony up ...

I have this book waiting on hold for me at the library, but I'm not quite sure if I want to read it. Will I zip right through it? Or ...

Hey, Stella! Thanks for posting in my Review for Food thread. I couldn't find any grammar mistakes. Which makes me very angry, but also very pleased with you. Your writing ...

Hey. I was instantly intrigued by this story. At first, I thought it was going to be a druggie story, but I was proved wrong. But… I didn’t like the ...

Bradsk88, Good job, yet again! You are capturing everything perfect. I could barely find anything in the line-by-line critique attached to the bottom. You make my job hard, dude. You ...