BigBadBear

Hey, Kylan! Thanks so much for letting me know that this was up! I love this story -- and it just gets better here. I owe you 5 critiques now, ...

Hey Slinds! I'm judging this for the contest! First, before I get going, I was insanely confused, like Black Ghost was. It made no sense in the beginning, so I ...

I'm soooooooo sorry for making you wait so long. I am. I've done nothing today but work, work, work. Truly sorry. But. I'm finally here. ^_^ But instead of laughing, ...

Hey, Kylan! Thanks so much for letting me know this is up! little black balls of tar -and-feathers – attending the carnival then people. And they didn't even have to ...

Hello, Holly! This is repayment for being freaktastically awesome every day. Thanks. I looked at the five concrete steps down to the sidewalk, looking pleasantly damp. I looked over to ...

Hey, Kylan! I feel I need to repay you for those amazing critiques on the Séance Series. I found this a highly enjoyable read. It has everything that you are ...

Jabber! *mucho glugs* It’s been two months Er, to keep with the same tense, say: "It'd been two months" Okay! Well. This was good; it wasn't spectacular. It wasn't amazing. ...

Caaaaaaaaaaaaat-sama! This is the first critique I've done this week! *jazzlebungles* (not to mention it's Saturday) Okay. Skip the lame grammar edits; Jabber's gotten them all. Dang you. I'll move ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! I have to say that I really liked this. I really do. It's a fantastic concept that can be suspenseful, thrilling and great, if you write ...

The first thing I noticed right off the bat was there was absolutely no capitalization in the beginning of the sentence. Seriously, dude. You could write this masterpiece. Just a ...

This is a really good poem. Seriously. It's original too. You had a few grammar mistakes that glare. Seriously. XD Or was it so fast that, I never had time ...

Hey, Yoyo. First off, I really liked this poem. Second off, I loved the 'Ow's. Haha. It made me smile. It was a really good poem. Not deep or anything, ...

Hey there. I'm Jared and I shall be your critic today. I'm going to be honest here, okay? I know you said that this was your favorite poem, but I ...

Hello, there! I'm Jared, and I'll be your critic for today. ;) I woke with a start. It was the same vivd [vivid, not vivd] reoccuring [reoccurring, not reoccuring] nightmare ...

Hey, Cat-sama. ABOUT FREAKING TIME YOU POST SOMETHING!!!! *ahem* Branches woven together, entwining together, disappearing into each other. Because I'm oh-so-honest, I'll tell you that I didn't like t