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Re: Dear Schmuck
Hey Cat-sama! I’m here because I’m judging the contest, and stuff, and so here I am! I’ve gone through and commented on a bunch of stuff. It’s not really too ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: NaNoWriMo's Coming to Town
P.S. I really want to know how you pronounce NaNoWriMo... I've been saying 'nano-wree-mo' but I'm sure I'm wrong. But 'nano-wry-mo' sounds weird... It's pronounced 'nano-wry-mo'... :) -Jared
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {eleven}
So sorry to get to this so late. But, better late than never! And I wanted to do a really in-depth critique... >.< Fantastic, as always. I'm really falling in ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {ten}
D: Kylan, this is tiny! It better be good... Well, I'm glad to say that it was good, and worth reading! ^_^ I feel that this story is going very ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: My Romance with the Sky
I'm not going to critique this poem, because I don't feel that I can. You know what's really cool about this? But, I read it a second time ... Bottom ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: My 1st short story!! :D The Road Less Traveled Part I
Hello! Welcome to YWS. I love [s]fresh meat[/s] new blood on YWS! It always makes this more interesting. As the person above you stated, you are required to critique 2 ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {nine}
Hey, Kylan! As always, fantastic. I love reading this. It's so much fun. One thing popped up into my mind as I read the last part, with the school classroom ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: My first Sonnet - A painted beauty
Hello! I don't think I've ever critiqued much of your work before. I have to tell you that this sonnet was incredibly hard to read, due to the commas. You, ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: The Nightmare Man
That was really gross. -Jared PS: Oh! I'm supposed to critique this too? Okay. I might as well. I liked this. It was really bloody, gory and all that fun ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {eight}
D: You did not just end the chapter there. Curse you, Kylan. I read this story way to fast. I need to. It's so addicting. Another fabulous chapter. I can't ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: To Write With The Left
*blushes* So sorry to get to this late. I swear. But. Now I'm here, so I hope you'll forgive me. The sound of horse hooves pounding on moist soil roared ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {seven}
Hey, Kylan! Thanks so much for letting me know this is up. ... Ugh. This is so freaking good. I love every second of it. I have to make this ...
Sep 19, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {six}
Kylan! Thank you so much for keeping me informed with this! I truly am in love with Elephant Boy. To tell the truth? I devoured this. I read it so ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {five}
Hey, Kylan! Thanks for letting me know about this one. “Why don't you take a look at your face for yourself,” he said and handed Charlie a portable mirror. This ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: what we left behind on those barbed wire fences
Hey, Kylan! (my name changed! :o) I find your writing irresistible so I just had to give this one a look. I lying in this sand we are smudged out ...
Sep 8, 2008
