BigBadBear

Haha. This made me laugh. :D The only stanza that didn't work for me is this one: In November I broke your cars. I ripped your drawings. And I told ...

Kylan, Hey, man! So. I thought that I had critiqued this, and I was right. I just never posted it. So sorry! Haha. Anyway, this was a very emotional piece, ...

Hey, June! I randomly selected this from your portfolio! I really, really like this poem. It's simple, it's fragile, and it's innocent. I really like it. Okay. There's two things ...

Xxxdo, Rape is a very sensitive subject. I know that you know that. It’s something that’s so painful to remember and so dreadful, that people are haunted by it. That’s ...

Xxxdo, I’m going to be honest. I couldn’t even comprehend what the heck was happening in the first half of the story. You embellish this piece with so much unneeded ...

Hello! [Shockingly] I could only find one thing that bugged me with this poem! And it's not even something major. The first letter of each line doesn't need to be ...

Wow. This is first grade poetry. I really hope that this is a joke. That was really uncalled for. Well, Midnight, dear, I think this is a very good first ...

Conrad Rice, You have me spellbound, my friend! I’m in awe at these two stories. They are both gripping with suspense and action, and I loved every second of it. ...

Penguin! Hello! So, I read this, and I liked it. It wasn't my favorite, but it was alright. I've never been one for break up stories. >.< Anyway. I didn’t. ...

I DID NOT FORGET TO CRITIQUE THIS I SWEAR ON MY MOTHER'S DEAD BODY. *ahem* So wide that you can almost see his soul through them, even this far away. ...

Hello, Conrad! Congrats on winning my blog contest! [prayer] This was my favorite out of the three. Not only was it easy to understand, but it was interesting. I loved ...

Ooh! I smell a best-selling author! Really, though. This was fantastic. Incredible! I loved every second of this story, and I rarely do here on this site. You deserve a ...

Snoink, Haha. Every time I read this, I start cracking up. This is the lamest contest critique I’ve ever given. >.< Thanks. It was just too funny to critique. And ...

Adnamarie, Hello, darling! I’m here on account of the contest that you entered! Well, I have to say that your main problem is realism here. Nothing in here seems real. ...

Chocoholic, Hello! I’m here because I’m going around and judging/critiquing all of the entries for my contest! I want to tell you that you did EXTREMELY well. You had the ...