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Re: The Rogue-Preface
A clear water droplet trickled down the window panel at a fast pace. This sentence intrigued me untilt he "at a fast pace" part. I don't know why, but...that just ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: Devil's Book- prologue
Alex sat in the church pew, fingering his cross in the darkness. It was always dark now. He only woke at night, his body switching instantly to a new time ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: A Dangerous Night Chapter 3
Hi, am I committing some heretical act by reviewing this chapter before I've read the rest? If that' so, feel free to hurl rotten tomatoes or what-have-you at me. The ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Down the Drain Chapter 1
First off, I gotta start by saying I quite appreciate your username, Mr. Reuben. Mostly because these days I've been craving a Reubeun sandwich like all hell. Anyway...onward ho with ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Icy Paths Prologue - A Small Victory
Sorry if I sound a bit cruel, but... So far, the story seems hideously generic. I was interested, but only vaguely, and certainly not enough to continue reading. Zakulas seems ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Sixteen)
Wow... That was just wonderful. I know you didn't like it much, but really--I haven't read the other chapters of this story, whatever it is, but already I found myself ...
Aug 24, 2008 -
Re: War Mage
Ash woke with a sense that something momentous was going to happen that day. Er...not a very promising beginning. First of all, having a main character named "Ash" is just...well, ...
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: The End of Innocence-Prologue
Jak Conwee gritted his teeth as another shell fell above the bunker, blinking manically to get the thick dust out of his eyes. For three and a half days, the ...
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: Coven Born Chapter One (part one)
Here's my first review...I'm not sure if I'm doing this right but I will try-- “Riley stop worrying,” exclaimed Sam. You need to put a comma between the "Riley" and ...
Aug 23, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Dexter in the Dark , mostly because it took a beautifully-executed character (Dexter) and MURDERED him. No pun intended, but...really. I think the worst kind of book isn't one that's ...
Aug 23, 2008
