Bhayden71297

Most of my short stories end without telling you what EXACTLY happened. The point of WHY Rosie was being taken away was not the set of the story, but as ...

Darn it! I changed those few things you have mentioned before...hm...whatever. Thanks for the compliment though :) Very appreciated, -Brie

Thanks both of you! Ill look into your suggestions! :) -brie

I think it flowed nicely! Though the chapter was short, it explained alot. :) Great job, please continue. -Brie

I completely agree with the message you have encoded. Nice poem, it made me laugh...and think of a few people as well. -Brie

Absolutely Brilliant. I loved it. Very dark and compelling, but tells a story so sadly true. Was not too simple, nor too descriptive. Loved it. -Brie