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(Please tell me what you think. It was a quick write, to refresh my brain and keep my writing skill active. Just comment on whatever catches your eye. Thanks- Brie♥)A ...

(A little thing I wrote after one amazing, important softball game. So. Much. Pressure. Give me anything ya got. Thx- Brie )One look at the score board told me all ...

(Any feedback welcome. About the plot, story idea, ending, beginning- please and thanks, Brie♥)“Mom,” was all she said.A woman of forty looked up into the stony eyes of a sorrow ...

(Any feedback welcome. About the plot, story idea, ending, beginning- please and thanks, Brie♥)“Mom,” was all she said.A woman of forty looked up into the stony eyes of a sorrow ...

(Any feedback welcome. About the plot, story idea, ending, beginning- please and thanks, Brie♥)“Mom,” was all she said.A woman of forty looked up into the stony eyes of a sorrow ...

(I really would like help with the tense of this piece. i want it in present tense, and would like help pointing out where I need to change it to ...

“Ey, Posh! Where ya going?”I turned away from my locker and followed him closely, wondering why he was heading to the west wing, when it was time for lunch, on ...