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Bezro

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: There’s a line Laughing Jill won’t cross

    This is a nice little story about the nice side almost all humans have, even deranged serial killers. Not sure if Laughing Jill was a serial killer, or just a ...

    Oct 14, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: ever since we founded rome

    I like this poem, and sadly it seems I don't really have much criticism for it as much as I try. Poetry is one of the harder writing forms to ...

    Oct 13, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: ever since we founded rome

    Note: This review has been deleted
    Sorry, submitted twice for some reason.

    Oct 13, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Horror Re: Simon Hallow

    I'll start with grammatical errors. Paragraph 1 "The man in white—Doctor Red—jotted down notes in his report" You did use em dashes correctly, but it would have just looked better ...

    Oct 13, 2024


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