Bezro
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This is a nice little story about the nice side almost all humans have, even deranged serial killers. Not sure if Laughing Jill was a serial killer, or just a ...
Oct 14, 2024
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I like this poem, and sadly it seems I don't really have much criticism for it as much as I try. Poetry is one of the harder writing forms to ...
Oct 13, 2024
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Sorry, submitted twice for some reason.Oct 13, 2024
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I'll start with grammatical errors. Paragraph 1 "The man in white—Doctor Red—jotted down notes in his report" You did use em dashes correctly, but it would have just looked better ...
Oct 13, 2024
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