BethanJones0506

I really enjoyed reading this piece, you have a really talented way of expressing emotions throughout the poem. The name itself is strong and intriguing, which makes me want to ...

This is a really great start to a well-developed piece of writing. The first person perspective helps with the understanding of the characterisation and to build a clear image of ...

This is a great start (second chapter) to your piece. There is already a strong narrative perspective and the characters are already well developed. When writing your flashbacks maybe try ...