BerlynRae

"I sat on my bed at home, bored out of my mind. Thinking of things to do, I finally settled on taking a walk through the woods. The forest was ...

"Austin told me that I’d forget about it. He said that it didn’t matter, that running would stop my mind from crashing. I actually believed him. Too bad Austin lied. ...

As always the voice is spot on. I could feel the distress of not wanting to be there and the annoyance of the how he feels compared to someone who ...

I very much enjoyed this piece and the reality of it. How true it is that we bind ourselves to someone without them doing them same in return and if ...

This one is by far my favorite. Why? You may ask. Well first off I now understand that this boy has a dysfunctional family. It adds depth and meaning to ...

Again, I'm having a hard time following your setting. Is it at a church or a school meeting? It seems that none of the chapters really correspond (setting wise). Hence, ...

I don't know exactly what to say to this piece, because it felt like it didn't quite flow. I was understanding it and then not. He hates his life (or ...

Interesting. I especially like the ending. "They think it is obscene. I think it is a work of art." I like how his opinion clashes so much with his "friends" ...