BenFranks

The idea of YWS is to help improve on ideas. Although you think it should generally be regarded as something very implicit and mysterious, clarity of meaning is still a ...

Thanks Evi. :) The reason for my excess description is I'm currently reading a political thriller by Greg Iles and he does a lot of over descriptive thought patterns that ...

Thank you Napal, journalism is my main routin' but I do love a thriller with big-end mumbo-jumbo words, I do admit :) Hopefully with more practice I'll be better. & ...

Charlie Higson is a genius.

Hey, welcome to YWS Canvas! And I know what you mean, I also have to study him!

Thank you for the feedback Lupis! :]

Thanks Lava, I'll edit that on my saved copy ;)

Thank you Classy :]

-Message me when you put the edited version back up and I'll review it for you :)

Thankyou for reviewing, I'm constantly editing so I'll look over this chapter when I can and try and incorporate some of your suggestions. I know I need to start working ...

Thankyou for the reviews guys :)

“Oh. My. God. BEN!” Haha, if you actually said that then tackled me I'd be sooo scared:) but in a funny way lol.

Hey there! Thankyou for the feedback You know, sorry for the creature who is obviously in pain? Well, I did mention this: The moon empathised at the weight the man's ...

O.o I'm in there :) haha, this was quite a fun old read Rocky! :)

Thankyou Classy :)