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Ben1243

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dried Apricots

    Thank God you've put down the date and time you've written this... haha

    Feb 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: (Soon to be a) Postcard

    Haha the reason their is so many spelling errors- or it seems like there is- is because I'm Australian lol The lack (complete lack, you'll notice) of punctuation in the ...

    Jan 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stains

    Hahaha don't even worry about it man... for the record I obviously wasn't drunk when I wrote this. If you haven't already, you should read some Ondaatje.

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You'll Be the Death of Me

    Ok........... no it is not the last too lines you need help with... its the whole thing. Listen, "saying" something about how "hurt" you are or whatever... writing the word ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stains

    You ever been drunk Krupp?

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stains

    Haha ok... for a start this should probably be in "dramatic" poetry... although its weird uve got those two "types" and not others.... anyway its supposed to be centre justified- ...

    Jan 25, 2009


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