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Thanks for the advice. Are you on team Fire Flower as well? If so, keep up the good work! :)

Sorry about the no spaces thing. There were some problems with the transfer. Thank you for reviewing! I'll definitely work on your other suggestions in further pieces.

Oh, by the way, this is only chapter one. I forgot to put that in the title.

This is interesting. I like the fact that it makes you think about things that we normally just accept as normal. The way you link the beginning and the end ...

Thanks for the advice. I'll try to improve on this in further chapters and other novels.

Greetings! This was really quite good. I, being accustomed to fables with happy endings, found this rather refreshing! Aside from a few grammar mistakes (I think they are mentioned in ...

I thought this was very good. Eleanor seems like a likable character that you can really take somewhere. Also, I like her confidence. I think this should either be an ...