BellaRoma

Okay, thanks. Next chapter things get worse. You know that 'incident' Layla mentioned...

BellaRoma's Rough Definitions (how I used them) Ire= Anger (as in irate) Fore= The front, ahead of others To answer your question. Mercy is a sort of alter ego, another ...

Thanks. I intend to post the next part, then take a break from this novel. I'll try to tag people in with the next part.

It's changed. Okay, I see why it needs that. Thanks for the tips. I'll tag you for Part 7.

In case you didn't see, it's called Imaginary Friends.

I have a title, but I thought it was too long winded to do the full title every time. I only did it for Parts 1 and 2. Are you ...

I told you I'd post it. Here is Part 6: Alive & Kicking .

I can assure you the next chapter will move things along, so just bear with me. Oh, and if anyone was wondering about the 'short description', it was made up ...

I like it! Very funny.

The machine does electroshock therapy, so it was kind of symbolic of where they are. BTW, I have seen the princess bride so I get what you're saying. You have ...

Thanks for the review.

For future reference, Merce is a nickname. I was going for a familiar, sibling like relationship between Layla and Mercy.

Ok. Punctuation isn't much to correct

I've read The Princess part 3. It was alright, I can't really say any more. Will get to chapter 4 soon.

Ignore the formatting issues. This is the last time I edit on my tablet.