BelarusBirdy

This is a beautiful poem with a beautiful story. Thanks for posting it. It will give me something to think about for several days :)

this is a magnificent poem! i like how you describe insanity because that's what it's like, i think.

That's really powerful. Someone actually said that? wow. I love the description.

I love this story! I think it's a great short story. I don't have any criticisms, I just wanted to tell you that I thought it was a very good ...

thanks!!

My second post on this site :) my first is in lyric poetry. Comments/criticisms are appreciated!!!

I appreciate any comments you want to leave :) I'm completely new to this site (though I've been writing since I learned how) and I would really appreciate suggestions from ...