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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Killing Butterflies: a tragedy [1] --Edited--

    I've only got a couple nitpicks-- grammar/typos. We were in the? shed-turned-office in his backyard that had, for the past year and a half, been our secret hideout late at ...

    Dec 5, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Don't Fret

    This is brilliant. With this short work, you've made me reflect on everything that I've lost, but also, somehow, on what I have gained. The prose itself is as heartfelt ...

    Dec 5, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: House-revised

    Ohh, what love makes you feel. It's very poetic, and has a subtle but appealing voice in it that speaks of a person thoroughly fascinated by love, and I'm interested ...

    Dec 1, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Timekeeper - Prologue

    A few nitpicks, first. :P Just some small things-- I loved this, as you'll soon read. The Timekeeper snorted . “You have all the time in the world,” the Timekeeper ...

    Nov 27, 2008


You have light and peace inside you. If you let it out, you can change the world around you.
— Uncle Iroh, Avatar the Last Airbender