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Re: Killing Butterflies: a tragedy [1] --Edited--
I've only got a couple nitpicks-- grammar/typos. We were in the? shed-turned-office in his backyard that had, for the past year and a half, been our secret hideout late at ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Don't Fret
This is brilliant. With this short work, you've made me reflect on everything that I've lost, but also, somehow, on what I have gained. The prose itself is as heartfelt ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: House-revised
Ohh, what love makes you feel. It's very poetic, and has a subtle but appealing voice in it that speaks of a person thoroughly fascinated by love, and I'm interested ...
Dec 1, 2008 -
Re: The Timekeeper - Prologue
A few nitpicks, first. :P Just some small things-- I loved this, as you'll soon read. The Timekeeper snorted . “You have all the time in the world,” the Timekeeper ...
Nov 27, 2008
