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Re: The Swirl 2.0 (Revamped)
That was a really amazing story! (I really like the title:) The story line was a really interesting (although a little cliche) but I especially liked how you brought some ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: April
This is a really fantastic piece and it really drew me into the world of your characters! I would love to read a continuation of this story. However, I also ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: I Won't Let Go (3)
This is a really great idea. It's nothing I've heard before and it grabbed my attention immediately. While the topic was extremely incredible, I also felt this chapter lacked a ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
I wasn't sure how I was going to like it when I first started it, because it's not at all what I'm used to reading, but it was absolutely marvelous! ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Best Friends
That was great! You had a couple spelling errors, punctuation problems, and grammar issues such as using "you're" instead of "your", but other than that, you have an absolutely stellar ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: I'm So Sorry
This was so fabulous! I really liked it! You are extremely talented, and I feel like this would make an absolutely beautiful song. Your piece really made me, as the ...
Dec 19, 2010
