Bechteltheauthor

Correction: I meant physical descriptions of the world and peoples appearances. There will be depth and human qualities, that's the focus of the story not the world around them which ...

Working title: going with "The sin of Association" right now. Open for suggestions. This is actually the second draft. I'm posting it here to get feedback and proofreading done for ...

There we go. Some productive feedback. Yeah I'm horrible with semi-colons. It's my greatest weakness as a writer. And I like your suggestions on the word use. I think I'll ...

Thank you. Your criticism is actually praise believe it or not. The scenery isn't important, it's her confused state of mind, and I'm happy to have properly conveyed that, but ...