Bazoo

Lolita, just the thought of it

Wow. I didn't see a humorous story coming. Good stuff.

Maybe you could close with a repeated line or something. I'm really bad at describing poetry techniques, but I don't get enough "feel" with that last line. There was a ...

This speech made me stare at the screen and crack up. So don't be surprised if you hear a chuckle in the audience.

Something about how this poem seemed to always end with a form of "know" and repeated basically the same thing over and over made me wish I had done something ...