Baywolf

Hello! First: I loved this!! The MC is funny, the take on the subject is fresh, and quite frankly I'm a sucker for super hero tales. Love them. I don't ...

I think you captured the mentality of someone with an eating disorder almost to a T. I've had people close to me struggle, and I've even been accused of having ...

Hello! I haven't reviewed in a while and when I read your desire for reveiws, I just had to answer the call. :) Forgive my rustiness...Red are corrections you need ...

Wow. That was powerful. I was almost to the point of tears when she started crying out to God to help her baby pass easily into Heaven. It was sweet, ...

Haha! Oh I'm so glad you wrote this! Poor forgotten leftovers! I've never thought of how they feel when I leave them unattended in my refrigerator only to remember them ...

Hello Hatter! There was only one error I could find with my nit-picky eyes, so here ya go: An echoe , It should be "echo" without the 'e'. My inner ...

Hello SilentRain! I'm here to review your poem (obviously.) :) Grammar: I like to get the bad stuff out of the way. Sorta like ripping a band-aid off. It'll only ...

Hey! Yet another great chapter! There isn't much for me to say other than a few nitpicks of grammar. You seem to be doing a great job of following a ...

Hey Homeless! You've been such an ardent reviewer of mine, that I have come to review this delightful poem of yours! And so the cycle continues... To get on with ...

I liked this, yet for some odd reason, I haven't the foggiest clue as to why. Perhaps its the style, perhaps its the content, I don't know. My favorite lines ...

Hey dragons, I agree with Rosey...sorry, but reading that was almost painful. The only author I have seen get away with an entire paragraph consisting of one run-on sentence is ...

Me likey! I just want to put out there, that I think you deserve a bit more than a C for this. Ahem. TO elaborate, and draw conclusions based upon ...

Hello! I did as you asked, and I checked this chapter out! Two words: Love it! The MC is so stoic, yet relatable, that I find myself believing she almost ...

Ahhhh so this is a vampire book. I was beginning to wonder why he was so perfect and talking to the weird girl in school. My only problem with this ...

So first off: I really want to know what happened to Emily. I sort of figured that her mom died, but why were those kids making fun of her? That's ...